Month: September 2024

Rhetorical Analysis

                                   Rhetorical Analysis

                                   By: MacKenna Riggs 

A person who was less than a week away from finishing their screenplay, stepped on a train with two members from a growing activism movement called Effective Altruism. Holly Morgan and Sam Hilton were the two members from EA met on the train. This person who was finishing their screenplay decided to join them on their trip to East Devon to finish their script, and because they wanted to learn more about the EA goal of being a better person. Hilton and Morgan were asked if they thought art would improve the world. Hilton disagreed that art would improve the world. EA is for improving the world, and someone is trying to convince the members of EA that art can make the world better too. There are lots of different ways to make art like painting, screenplays/ movies, drawings. 

One of the main points of the chapter is to prove that art can improve the world, just in a different way that the members of EA are trying to improve and help the world. “Rodley pointed out that the U.S. TV series Will and Grace might have made some American’s more accepting of gays.” (Emerging. Pg. 326) 

With this piece of evidence they’re trying to prove that some forms of art can improve the world. This TV series alone changed the way the world views gays in society. This helped prove the screen player’s point of view to the members of EA that art can change the outlook on different things, and that it could improve their movement if they incorporated an artist so that their movement could be seen visually. 

This is a clear piece of evidence that shows how art can improve the world’s view on different topics like race, LGBTQ, and how it could benefit their movement because there are people who enjoy art and would prefer to see things presented by art in whatever form that may be.

PSY-105 work sample

MacKenna Riggs

PSY-105 

Reflection Essay #2

In class, our lessons on infancy and childhood, adolescent, and adulthood development were super interesting for me. Growing up, I have always been interested in working with children. When I was in middle school I really wanted to be a kindergarten teacher. Once I started to get interested in nursing I was immediately interested in being a pediatric nurse, and now my dream specialty in nursing is labor and delivery. I think the development of humans as we get older, especially from childhood into adolescents and then into adulthood is super cool. How our brain changes, we grow physically and mentally, I think that’s all super cool and interesting. It makes it even more interesting because looking back I can now see some of the growth I’ve made since entering into my adolescent years, at least maturity.

I have lots of younger cousins because I come from a really big family, and I always loved to go see my baby cousins because I just loved being around kids and watching them grow. I think it’s so interesting how our body and minds change over the years and we don’t even really realize it until we’re old enough to see how much we’ve actually grown and changed over the years. 

Everything we’ve learned about development is definitely important to my future career, and I can take everything we’ve learned about children into consideration when I have my own children, and when taking care of my younger cousins because we all know it can be concerning taking care of young children, and sometimes frustrating because they don’t always listen, but having this lesson to reflect on when a child is misbehaving is super helpful.

I chose this as my sample piece for PSY-105 because we had to write two reflections about anything we learned in class. These reflections were good ways for me to reflect about what we learned and how I could apply this to my future. I chose my reflection on infancy and childhood, adolescents, and adulthood development because those are just good things to have an understanding of, especially when going into healthcare. He didn’t give a rubric for this reflection because he wanted us to be able to write about what we learned in class to understand it more. Since we didn’t have a rubric for this, I felt that I was able to make more sense of it because I was able to put more meaning into it and why it is important for my future career, and just overall knowledge about how we all develop. This reflects what we did in PSY-105. We learned a lot about pretty much everything, and it’s all important for my future, but this is super important because I can apply it to everyday situations like when I’m spending time with my younger cousins, or around my friends and family. I’ve learned a lot in PSY-105 that will all be important for me someday. These reflections were also a good way for me to practice my writing by just reflecting on what we learned. 

IHS-130 work sample

I am a first year nursing major, and discussing nursing in IHS class has sparked my interest for nursing even more. I’ve grown up around healthcare workers like nurses, respiratory therapists, and physical therapists, so I’ve always had an interest in becoming a healthcare worker myself. Even as a child I always wanted to be a nurse, so as I got older I started to look more into what a nurse does. I work in an assisted living senior community home as a caregiver, and I get so much joy from taking care of the residents where I work, and it makes me more excited to take care of my patients as a nurse someday. I believe nursing is a good fit for me because I enjoy helping others, and I aspire to be someone’s voice when they feel like they’re not being heard. Nurses listen to their patients, care for them like no other, and are extremely patient even in difficult work conditions for them. Nurses go above and beyond to be the best nurse they can be for everyone around them, and I can’t wait to be able to do the same and give back to others when they need me most. Not only does science and medicine interest me, but so does helping other people, and nursing is the perfect career to learn about science and medicine, and get to help others in need, and be their hand to hold when they have no one else. 

When we did the simulation lab in class it made me excited for my future in nursing school and as a nurse. Everything we did was directly related to nursing and was taught by someone who teaches nursing students. Being around the nursing instructor who taught us, and in an environment practicing some skills was super helpful in the moment and we learned skills that I will forever need to keep with me. 

I chose to upload this as my sample for IHS because this was the reflection we all had to write for the end of the semester, showing what we learned about our chosen profession, and at least one other chosen reflection. I learned a lot about my major in IHS and learned a lot about what a social worker does as well. We did a little mini simulation lab with dummies, where we learned to do skills like blood pressure and pluses, a skill I will forever need as a nurse. We learned what the average body temperature is, the normal blood pressure, pulse, etc. and I will always need to know those. This is meaningful for the course because we discussed pretty much every health profession, and that class is specifically for future healthcare workers. As a nurse, I’m going to have to work with a lot of doctors, pharmacists, social workers, and all the other healthcare workers who work in hospitals. We discussed all of these, so I have a better understanding of how we can all work together as a team and help each other out. This course taught me a lot about nursing and all the other healthcare professions as well, and also a lot of skills I will take with me to the Portland campus. This reflection was a good place for me to practice my writing by reflecting on what we did in class, and also made me think about my future in nursing. 

Individualized Error

My first draft for my first essay was a bit bumpy because I haven’t taken English since my first semester of senior year in high school, but I put down my thoughts, worked with peers for review and advice, and then I took their advice to improve my essay. The intro paragraph was especially harder for me. I was able to improve my introduction paragraph to make my point more clear. A good way for me to work through my most common writing errors is to read through it a couple times to catch any mistakes that I might not have caught the first time. I felt that this was the process that worked best for me because when I read through it the first time, I wouldn’t catch too many mistakes, but once I read through it a couple more times, I would notice more mistakes. For example, I would recognize a spot where I missed a period or comma, or I would find a spot where I put a comma where it wasn’t needed. I would also catch some run on sentences that I could split up into two. This worked the best for me because I would keep noticing errors to correct. Another technique that worked well for me was focusing on one spot in the essay. If I noticed multiple spots that needed editing, I would go back and forth between the two, but after a while I started to focus on one spot so I could do my best work editing it and not managing multiple paragraphs. This relates to learning outcome number six because I talk about how I worked through my common writing errors and how I improved those common writing errors in my grammar, punctuation, and spelling. 

Document Work (MLA)

“Trigger warnings are alerts that professors are expected to issue if something in a course might cause a strong emotional response. For example, some students have called for that Chinua Achebe’s Things Fall Apart describes racial violence and that F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Greatest Gatsby portrays misogyny and physical abuse, so that students who have been previously victimized by racism or domestic violence can choose to avoid these works, which they believe might ‘trigger’ a recurrence of past trauma” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 231).

This quote above shows my ability to cite sources at the end of the quotes. My citation here was, “(Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 231).” I always cited my sources like this when we were using essays. If we used a video I would cite it like “(Ronson. 2:31).” This was how I cited essays and videos all throughout the semester in my essays. I will continue to use this skill in my other classes this semester and in any future classes where I will have to cite my sources like this. This is an important skill I have picked up on throughout ENG-110, and it's important because I'm ethically citing my sources. This relates to learning outcome number five because it shows how I was able appropriately cite my sources throughout the semester. 

Peer Review

These are two pictures of some of my peers' first drafts from the whole semester. When the semester started, I didn’t have the best peer review skills because we didn’t practice it too much when I was in high school, maybe only a couple times, so practicing it in ENG-110 has helped me develop better skills as a peer reviewer, and also apply those skills to my own writing. I wasn’t super confident in my peer review skills at first but as we discussed more as a class and I heard other people's skills when it came to peer review, it helped me develop better skills to give my peers better feedback. Throughout the semester I’ve gotten more confident in my peer review so I can give better feedback as we move through the semester and in future classes. I would start by reading the whole paragraph/ essay, and giving small comments as I went through for things that stood out to me like grammar mistakes. I then would give corrections on some words if I thought there was a stronger word, and to wrap it up I would state what I liked, and mark pieces of the paragraph or essay that stood out to me and that I thought were really strong. These are all skills I will carry throughout my future classes and when finishing out the semester in ENG-110. This is evidence for learning outcome number four because it shows how I was giving my peers feedback in a respectful manner. 

Active Reading

These are some of the notes I took from the readings throughout the semester. These notes came from all the texts were read from the book Emerging. I actively read the texts and made notes of things that could be useful to my writing. These notes helped me with peer review, adding personal experience into my writing which I’ve done in all my essays, how to add quotations and summarize them, and the others are just writing terms we discussed in class to help us when writing our essays. These notes, and other texts we read that I don’t have notes of, really helped me when it came to writing, especially summarizing my quotes and when giving peer review. These notes and texts also helped me when it came time to us incorporating synthesis in our essays. Using two different sources in my essay kind of confused me at first and was harder for me than using one, but going back to my notes and the book about synthesis helped me compare and contrast the two essays. They’ve helped me all throughout the semester and helped me when writing all my essays. They’ve helped me apply key techniques and structures to my writing, and I will continue to use these techniques in future classes. This is evidence for learning outcome number three because it shows that I was actively reading throughout the semester. They helped me with skills I had to use in class. 

Integrating Ideas

Students who are demanding trigger warnings and for certain books to be banned are not only negatively affecting themselves, but also students who don’t suffer from PTSD or other psychological disorders. A strong quote to support this is, “the extensive use of trigger warnings may also foster unhealthy mental habits in the vastly larger group of students who do not suffer from PTSD or other anxiety disorders.” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 238). This relates to my point above about my personal experience because it states how trigger warnings encourage students and teachers to believe that there’s something wrong with discussing difficult topics in history, and like I stated above, once I got to my senior year in high school, I just stopped speaking up in discussions because I was too afraid what I was going to say would hurt someone. I remember in one of my discussions in AP Human Geography my senior year, I just sat there silent the whole time because I wasn’t sure what the right thing to say was. These trigger warnings do encourage me to participate less in class discussions.

Above is one paragraph from my first essay that demonstrates my ability to select, integrate, and explain my quotes in my essay. My intro paragraph for my first essay wasn’t the best. English classes in high school for me were only a semester long, so I hadn't been in an English class for a while until ENG-110. I wasn’t sure how to start a strong introduction paragraph, but once I got more reviews from my peers I slowly started making corrections and making it stronger. I used quotes from the essay “The Coddling of The American Mind.” I started by reading through and reflecting on which quote would best help support my point made in my introduction paragraph, which was how there should be harsh topics discussed in classrooms because it’s affecting young college students in a negative way. To select a quote I started my paragraph by introducing the point I was trying to make, and using the quote to back me up and defend my point. My first sentence in that paragraph and my quote are closely related to each other, so that demonstrates my ability to select and integrate quotes into my essay. I then explained the quote by using a personal experience of how these trigger warnings have affected me in my own classroom throughout high school and college. This relates to learning outcome number two because it shows my ability to use quotations and summarize and analyze what my quote is saying.

Recursive Process

On the left is a rough draft of my first introduction paragraph from the first essay we wrote. On the right is my final introduction paragraph for the first essay. I didn’t state the essays or the authors in my first introduction paragraph, so I had a lot of revision to do. I took the advice from my peers from our peer review, and added in the authors and essays, and talked about them more. I introduced the essay and I talked about the main point of the essay. You can see in the left paragraph that I didn’t really have any clear point of where to start or where my essay was going to take me and what I was going to talk about. I reread the essay and got  a better understanding, and then I started to connect to it more. I wrote down my sentences and opinions and then reflected on what I wrote, and made any corrections that were clear to me. I also would make sure what I had was relevant to the main point of my essay, so that my readers weren't confused when reading it. My main revision processes were to reread and correct any errors, and make sure what I had was relevant and made sense. I made a lot of progress from my first introduction paragraph compared to my final introduction paragraph and all throughout my final draft. This is evidence from learning outcome number one because it shows my ability to approach writing in a recursive process, by revising my drafts. 

Significant Writing Process

How Trigger Warnings Are Affecting College Campuses

   And The Younger Generation

In the essay “The Coddling of The American Mind,” the authors Greg Lukianoff and Jonathan Haidt examine the rise of speech restrictions on college campuses across the U.S, including the demand for trigger warnings on some topics that might seem to negatively affect students who suffer from trauma. Some topics can bring back negative memories for students which may affect their mental health. Also in the essay, the authors state that it is beneficial to  have discussions around crucial subjects because it prepares students for the “real world” where they will have to face challenging and uncomfortable situations. I personally agree that it’s important for students to discuss hard topics as they get older because they will not always be protected by trigger warnings, and able to avoid uncomfortable topics or situations outside of school. However, I also agree with the fact that teachers should be conscious when discussing difficult topics because for some students it brings back trauma. I will be discussing how I agree that these harsh topics affect some students negatively, and why I also agree that there should be hard topics discussed in class because it’s affecting college campuses, myself as a college student, and how the younger generations are learning.  

In their essay, Greg Lukianoff and Jonathan Haidt discuss how students all across the country are demanding trigger warnings when having discussions and classes around difficult topics, and also demanding trigger warnings on pieces of literature. “Trigger warnings are alerts that professors are expected to issue if something in a course might cause a strong emotional response. For example, some students have called for that Chinua Achebe’s Things Fall Apart describes racial violence and that F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Greatest Gatsby portrays misogyny and physical abuse, so that students who have been previously victimized by racism or domestic violence can choose to avoid these works, which they believe might ‘trigger’ a recurrence of past trauma.” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 231). I agree with this piece of evidence that teachers should give some warning when they’re planning to discuss topics that can possibly be triggering in their class, so their students can prepare or choose not to participate in discussions that trigger their trauma. However, I disagree with the fact that they should never be discussed in class. Students should challenge themselves by having difficult discussions because they won’t be able to avoid difficult topics when they’re in the working field. 

Although I do agree with the fact that teachers need to be cautious when discussing hard topics, I also agree with the fact that students should be able to discuss subjects that might make them uncomfortable. In life, we aren’t always going to be able to just walk away from certain things that make us uncomfortable, and we must build the skills to deal with uncomfortable topics. The saying “sometimes you have to do things you don’t want to do” is true, and it’s unfair if that phrase only applies to certain people. 

Throughout my time in high school, my teachers were very conscious and understanding when it came to difficult topics for certain students because they were aware it could possibly bring back trauma for certain students. I remember having discussions in classes throughout all four years of high school in my history and social studies classes, each of my teachers making it very clear when we would be discussing a difficult topic. They always made sure that students were aware that if the topic being discussed brought back trauma or unwanted memories, that we were allowed to step out of the classroom and come back when we were ready. After seeing my teachers be so cautious about these possibly triggering subjects, I have also learned to be careful when discussing these topics. Although it is good to be cautious when discussing these topics, I feel like it made myself and other classmates worried to speak up and give our opinion in class discussions because we were afraid of offending someone or saying the “wrong thing.” It got to the point where in my senior year, I barely ever spoke up in class discussions because I was too afraid I was going to offend someone and then my grade would be affected by what I thought, even though my teachers always said, “there’s no right or wrong answer, just state your opinion.” 

Students who are demanding trigger warnings and for certain books to be banned are not only negatively affecting themselves, but also students who don’t suffer from PTSD or other psychological disorders. A strong quote to support this is, “the extensive use of trigger warnings may also foster unhealthy mental habits in the vastly larger group of students who do not suffer from PTSD or other anxiety disorders.” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 238). This relates to my point above about my personal experience because it states how trigger warnings encourage students and teachers to believe that there’s something wrong with discussing difficult topics in history, and like I stated above, once I got to my senior year in high school, I just stopped speaking up in discussions because I was too afraid what I was going to say would hurt someone. I remember in one of my discussions in AP Human Geography my senior year, I just sat there silent the whole time because I wasn’t sure what the right thing to say was. These trigger warnings do encourage me to participate less in class discussions. 

There is, however, a deeper problem with trigger warnings. “According to the most-basic tenets of psychology, the very idea of helping people with anxiety disorders avoid the things they fear is misguided. A person who is trapped in an elevator during a power outage may panic and think she is going to die. That frightening experience can change neural connections in her amygdala, leading to an elevator phobia. If you want this woman to retain her fear for life, you should help her avoid elevators.” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 238). This section in the essay of “The Coddling of the American Mind” clearly shows how avoiding your fears in life can cause negative psychological effects. In order for people to get over their fears or discomfort, they need to face them to realize everything will be okay. Of course, there’s some situations that are really traumatic, but if you never face your fears you’ll never get over them. If everyone avoided difficult or uncomfortable subjects in class, no one would learn, and those affected would continue to hide behind their fears. Although this is a very different situation and can’t be used to compare to others who suffer from traumatic situations, I have a fear of traveling alone. If I never travel alone, I’ll never get over my fear of traveling all by myself, but after I travel by myself, I can look back and tell myself it wasn’t as bad as it seemed. 

Students who suffer from PTSD and psychological disorders are demanding trigger warnings so they can hide behind their own fears, not knowing that that is affecting them negatively, too. A strong quote to support that is, “students who call for trigger warnings may be correct that some of their peers are harboring memories of trauma that could be reactivated by course readings. But they are wrong to try to prevent such reactivations. Students with PTSD should of course get treatment, but they should not try to avoid normal life, with its many opportunities for habituation.” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 238). Like I stated above, if you don’t face your fears in life you won’t be able to get over them. Of course people with PTSD should go to therapy, seek the help they need, and do what works best for them in terms of facing their trauma, but they should try not to let it affect their everyday life. There are so many opportunities they’re missing out on because they’re too afraid to face their fears. 

Although I do think teachers should warn students about what they’ll be discussing in class, especially if it’s a difficult or uncomfortable topic, I also think students should be challenged to discuss more difficult topics because they’re not always going to be protected by trigger warnings. These challenging discussions are important for education because they’re slowly preparing you for the world when you’re going to have to do things you don’t want to do. A quote from the essay to support my opinion is, “universities themselves should try to raise consciousness about the need to balance freedom of speech with the need to make all students feel welcome. Talking openly about such conflicting but important values is just the sort of challenging exercise that any diverse but tolerant community must learn to do.” (Lukianoff and Haidt. Pg 242). This quote is stating that of course teachers and students should be conscious when discussing difficult topics that could affect some in a negative way, but also saying how it’s important to be able to discuss those difficult topics, and anyone should be able to learn how to do it. 

In my experience, my teachers have always been understanding if a topic is too much for one student, but they always found support for that student whether it was talking to them personally or helping them seek support from a guidance counselor or therapist. From my personal experience, I agree with the author’s point that teachers and professors all throughout the U.S. in high school classrooms and college campuses, should encourage and challenge students to have difficult discussions about U.S. history, while being considerate of others’ feelings. There shouldn’t be trigger warnings for everything, since that also affects how students learn and work who don’t suffer from PTSD or other anxiety disorders. As they stated in the essay, trigger warnings are also affecting those who are comfortable discussing these topics, but are not anymore because they’re afraid to offend someone. As a current college student in the U.S., I can defend that these trigger warnings are also affecting the way I learn and affecting how I approach a class with my opinion. 

Above is the essay I decided to use for my significant writing process. I chose my first essay from ENG-110, How Trigger Warnings Are Affecting Our College Campuses. I chose this essay for my significant writing process because I could tell how I improved throughout, and I also connected very closely to it because what I discussed in the essay is something I’m going through as a college student in this world. I improved my organization of the essay throughout because at first it was unorganized, so I was able to improve that and make it flow better and fit together. I talked about how trigger warnings, as discussed by Greg Lukianoff and Johnathon Haidt, are not only negatively affecting those who are trying to hide from a conversation that makes them uncomfortable, like race for example, but also affecting those who aren’t personally affected. These trigger warnings have made me afraid to speak up in class discussions because I never know if what I’m going to say will hurt someone. The trigger warnings are only teaching people to run from what they’re afraid of, instead of facing it. I chose this piece because it’s an ongoing issue on our campuses throughout the United States, and I am personally affected as a current college student, making me afraid to use my voice because I’m afraid what I’m going to say will be offensive to a group of people. 

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